hope and DREAM and magic - nnnv ➡ Hase 🌱

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The good

The concept of putting 2 separated text groups with the joint "It's a dream" in the middle, reinforced with dream imagery. I'd say that's the selling point of this artwork.
I learned a lot about some basic Illustrator operation with repeating pattern.
The 4 cute icons in the top right.
Improvement in posing choice (not just people standing anymore) <= Biggest improvement!
The designing process in Illustrator is getting a bit faster now.

The many problems listed inGarden/Roadblock#Weakness of Poster Commission are still there
- losing willpower towards the end of the commission so the graphic design stays within the comfort zone, and doesn't feel new and explorative enough.
- still spending too much time on non-drawing tasks: thinking about the content of the text and how it would relate to the artwork.
Some parts in the character drawings look inconsistent, the distribution of details and render level is still uncontrolled
- mostly because I haven't found a good way to control big strokes and drawing while zoomed out.
The stylized building BG serve its purpose but maybe could use some more visual treatment. Right now, it looks rather basic.
I couldn't achieve the intended composition: left heavy, to focus more on the characters. The visual weight of the typography is heavier than I intended because of the overall shape and size of the group.
- the Left to Right order of the the text kinda break the intended flow (lower right to upper left), maybe I should have flip the artwork.